- 26 Jul 2016 16:33
#179566
Wow, I'm not sure what I'm impressed more by, your reaction time or your ability to get it dead on.
It looks much better, were I looking at it for the first time it'd be a 9/10. The reason it is a 9, however, and not a 10, is because of these two minor things:
The arms are a wee bit short. Refer to the picture above I had made as an attachment. The arms are long enough so that they can be juuuust over the egg. Currently, your arms can't reach over the egg in her pouch.
Also, the tail. Referring to the picture above, you can see the tail is much like a fin of a fish. Flat, and the curvature of the tip being comparable to a parabola. If you don't get what I'm saying, you can see what I mean below :)
On the left is the current tail, on the right is how the tail appears in the reference image above in the last post of mine.
If you get these two things good, I think it'll be a good enough model, then we can see if the developers like it.
(Note: I'm not acting like I'm running the show, I only noticed the lack of help for models around the modelling topics, so I'm trying to pitch in. :))
EDIT: Okay... so I looked more into your tail and noticed something. There appears to be a bit of a unnecessary bulk added to the tail, making it look fat. I also noticed that the tail is curved, when based on other sources, it is more straightened.
I've attached 2 images to help out with these problems (one of chansey, and another of her tail marked with red lines. The left red line shows how Chansey has too much bulk by showing what could be cut down, and the right red line shows how the tail could be straightened).
As a helpful reminder, these are just suggestions. You don't have to, like, abide by them :p
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