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Poliwrath

PostPosted: 17 Apr 2013 22:06
by lugiaisbeast101
Poliwrath Normal

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Q: Would you like me to individually name each piece Ex: L Leg pc 1, L Leg pc 2, etc. or no?

Edit: Made the model touch the block like told.

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Re: Poliwrath

PostPosted: 24 Apr 2013 19:17
by SPG
ok, i have had a hard time trying to figure out if we will approve it or not, and i have finaly figured out what i need to say, basiclly, you mixed roundness with "blockyness" making it look very bad, so the bottom of poliwrath would need to curve just like the arms do. second of all, the swirl on its belly looks like you stole it from art work and doesnt fit, you may also disagree with this statement, but it needs noise, it looks very odd other wise without it because it looks so plain, you may not know how to add noise, but im sure someone can help you with it, so fix these things and come back to us (also post it in gen 1 modeler feedback so you get better responses from others and more help instead of back in beginner)

Re: Poliwrath

PostPosted: 25 Apr 2013 21:03
by lugiaisbeast101
Ok, will work on it sometime this weekend, I posted this up before kary told me to add noise and highlights so sorry about that.

Re: Poliwrath

PostPosted: 06 Jul 2013 07:05
by osidien(withouttheB)
I indeed like SPG have a problem with it.
Which is weird cuz its a good model