- 23 Feb 2013 12:50
looks good, but yes, the stem is waaay too short.
see how it kind of curves behind the head to look like it's more droopy?
another thing that looks a bit weird are the penises around it's neck, they look too flat. make them a block or two thick and it would look much better. :)
and the face looks off too.
i think the green jaw-like part on the bottom of it's head is too fat, making it a little thinner would be best. and give the black part more space, maybe just a teensy bit wider.
and now texture wise, the yellow circles on the head are supposed to be much bigger. and like i said before, ease up on the colors you use, that yellow is way too intense and hurts my eyes. make the yellow lighter and duller so that it looks good with that shade of green.
a bit of shading and highlights wouldn't hurt either.
other than what i mentioned, i'd say you've got yourself a pretty neat model. :)
~stop this train, i wanna get off and go home again. i can't take the speed it's moving in, i know i can't, but honestly, won't someone stop this train.~