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My First Model - MewTwo

PostPosted: 27 Apr 2013 09:42
by Liam_olden
Hey all, this is my first model (originally i tried a lugia, but decicded this was a much easier first model) please tell me what i could do to improve.

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Thanks

Re: My First Model - MewTwo

PostPosted: 27 Apr 2013 11:00
by Ewcongogamer
When have circles been added??

Re: My First Model - MewTwo

PostPosted: 27 Apr 2013 11:03
by Jumpyporcupine
Turbo model thingy? Those can't be added.

Re: My First Model - MewTwo

PostPosted: 28 Apr 2013 01:31
by Liam_olden
Oh ok i didnt know that. i have changed it to normal. Please more feedback.

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Re: My First Model - MewTwo

PostPosted: 28 Apr 2013 03:37
by zero_breaker
There are a lot of stuff, hope you have time to fix them :P

1) There should be some sort of a half loop connecting the head and the neck.
2) The tail is way too thin, make it fatter.
3) The horns don't look like that, change it.
4) The whole body is too thin, add some bulk to it.
5) Round the whole model.

Fix those, and I'll see what else can be fixed :3

Re: My First Model - MewTwo

PostPosted: 28 Apr 2013 12:24
by SPG
the model's feet also need to touch that wood block

Re: My First Model - MewTwo

PostPosted: 28 Apr 2013 16:07
by Ewcongogamer
Has no one done a lugia at all? Go ahead and show us where you were with that one if you want.

Re: My First Model - MewTwo

PostPosted: 28 Apr 2013 16:16
by SPG
Ewcongogamer wrote:Has no one done a lugia at all? Go ahead and show us where you were with that one if you want.

max made a lugia, we dont have it though

Re: My First Model - MewTwo

PostPosted: 28 Apr 2013 16:17
by Ewcongogamer
Max is he still around? Do we have images of a good model?

Re: My First Model - MewTwo

PostPosted: 28 Apr 2013 16:51
by SPG
Ewcongogamer wrote:Max is he still around? Do we have images of a good model?

no, he left without saying anything, and we never moved over max's lugia to the archive