Page 1 of 1

Shellder Line

PostPosted: 27 Aug 2016 22:02
by souploop2
Shellder:



Cloyster:


Shellder Line

PostPosted: 28 Aug 2016 12:51
by souploop2
_______________________________________

Shellder Line

PostPosted: 28 Aug 2016 13:45
by bvanseghi
Confirmed that these models are not stolen. Excellent models! There are some minor errors, though:

SHELLDER:
- Nothing wrong spotted so far.
Rating: 10/10

CLOYSTER:
- The inner right shell seems aligned with the inner left. It's supposed to be bent inward a bit towards the inner left shell (from Cloyster's POV).
- The shell needs to be a bit more rugged. It is smooth and symmetrical, looking too artificial.
Rating: 8/10

BOTH:
- After all, errors are fixed, you should try to reduce the poly count for both as much as you can while still maintaining the shape.

REFERENCE:
SHELLDER:
Image

CLOYSTER
Image

Shellder Line

PostPosted: 29 Aug 2016 10:52
by souploop2
Thank you so much for the great feedback! Do they look better? :-)

Shellder Line

PostPosted: 29 Aug 2016 12:58
by bvanseghi
I have updated my previous post. Some problems still remain with Cloyster, but so far Shellder seems perfected in terms of appearance.

I will however take a deeper look when I get back to see if I overlooked anything. Nice improvements.