Magmar Remake by Nova Spartan on Sketchfab
Magmar Remake by Nova Spartan on Sketchfab
Megit wrote:It looks good, but a few things:Like most of the time, I used the X and Y model as a reference, and it showed most of what you mentioned as I have it. Either way, after it's textured, if it still looks off, i'll change it, seeing how it would be a simple fix.
The claws both on it's hands and feet seem a little off, they should be a bit shorter, like here:
And the whole "flesh-part" of the feet seem a litte too short as well, could use a slightly bigger heel.
And the claws on the feet should be a bit farther apart.
Then the flames on its head, shouldn't they be a big more perky upwards?
And what about the flame on the tail?
Otherwise, nice work, and nice low poly count.
Arsonist wrote:So i can see people making it evident that the hands and feet seem a touch off to them, and i can see it in the hand with the closeness of the thumb to it's index finger, but the feet seem fine, if a little narrow.I modified some of what you mentioned. The distance of the thumb to the index finger, made the feet a little wider, and modified the beak a little bit.
The only other thing that i can see slightly askew with the form of the model is the top half of it's beak, which in x and y has a little bit more or a :3 shape to it. Not nearly as exaggerated as the emoticon, but it's there.
The rest is 100% nitpicking, lookin' good.
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