Lookymon wrote:This is coming along nicely! The head definitely looks a lot better, but theres still a few final things I have to say about the model. The bridge of the nose has a kind of awkward dip in it that would look perfectly fine if it was more flattened out/level. The body is looking really nice, I like the sort of half and half stance where it's kind of in between 2 legs and 4, so no one can really complain (especially since it works pretty nice for your model), but it looks a little wide at the front. Maybe bring it in just a tiny bit. Otherwise you've done some good work here!
Sweet thats some good feedback, I will have a go with the nose and make it a little skinnier
i like that you made her bipedal instead, it really looks a lot better this way. but the tail kinda ruins it for me. it shouldn't be so thin and sticking straight up like that, it's a very unnatural pose and looks like it would be very uncomfortable.
i'd suggest making it a little thicker and lowered towards the ground.
also, the eyes look a little awkward since they have no outline. give it a little darker blue outline around the eye (not a whole lot), just a teensy bit darker would set it apart from just being a marking in the pattern. maybe add a teeny bit of a highlight in the red of the eye as well, just to add some life to them.