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By ryik
#10956 Critique:
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Neck puffs are too spiky. They need to be more puffy~ like altaria
Legs look a bit too thin.
Nose is too blocky.
Add depth to create inner-ears
Hypnotism thingy needs to be round. Also, it has a hole in it, like a doughnut


It's not bad. Wouldn't take too much to make it just as good as some pokemon already implemented.
By Yaseen
#11015 Looks good but really blocky
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By ryik
#11020 critiquev2:
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He's too tall. The pixelmon mod is scale-modeled. Hypno is slightly bigger than 1 2/3rds blocks tall.
Head is too big for his body. Make him lose weight.
Legs are too long. It should be (very) roughly 1/3rd of its height~ 5/9ths of a block.
Make ears more vertical.
the hole in the pendulum is too big.
Arms go underneath neck puffs.
Nose is droopy. I meant to tell you to make it more pointy
http://cdn.bulbagarden.net/upload/thumb ... 7Hypno.png

Looks more detailed, but also more disproportionate.
By KASH77
#11024 ok thx for your critique but i do not say how to put fine details on a small model.
By Xwaffle
#11036 This is kinda messy. It looks like a kangaroo, and isn't centered. I'd say try making it more smooth, and less blocky. Give it a shot :D
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By SPG
#11047
Xwaffle wrote:This is kinda messy. It looks like a kangaroo, and isn't centered. I'd say try making it more smooth, and less blocky. Give it a shot :D

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