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By Morgebby00
#169797 Just finished a grass type gym with a leader and trainers and such :) Let me know what you think :)
Gym Screenshots

NOTE: All trainer skins are just placeholders, although they don't need to be
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Snapshot Download Link
http://www.mediafire.com/download/jp7l2 ... 2.snapshot
For some reason the NPCs were not in the snapshot :/
Now we move on to the trainers :)
NOTE: If any of the natures are messed up or other things, I'm sorry XD Its late here :(
Trainer #1:
Spoiler:
Pokémon #1: Bulbasaur
Nature: Timid Item: Eviolite
EV: 240 SpA 240 Spe IV: All IVs
Ability: Chlorophyll
- Growth
- Sleep Powder
- Giga Drain
-Sludge Bomb

Pokémon #2: Snivy
Nature: Timid Item: Eviolite
EV: 240 SpA 252 Spe IV: HP Ice
Ability: Contrary
- Glare
- Leaf Storm
- Hidden Power (Ice)
- Synthesis

Pokémon #3: Tangela
Nature: Bold Item: Eviolite
EV: 252 HP 252 Def 4 Spe IV: HP Fire
Ability: Regenerator
-Giga Drain
-Sleep Powder
-Synthesis
-Hidden Power (Fire)

Trainer #2
Spoiler:
Pokémon #1: Oddish
Nature: Timid Item: Life Orb
EV: 240 Spa 200 Spe IV: HP Fire
Ability: Chlorophyll
- Hidden Power (fire)
- Sleep Powder
- Sludge Bomb
- Giga Drain

Pokémon #2: Exeggutor
Nature: Timid Item: Life Orb
EV: 252 Spa 252 Spe 4 SpD IV: HP Fire
Ability: Chlorophyll
- Leaf Storm
- Psychic
-Hidden Power
-Sunny Day


Trainer #3
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Pokémon #1: Sunflora
Nature: Modest Item: Life Orb
EV: 92 HP 252 SpA 164 Spe IV: HP Ice
Ability: Solar Power
- Earth Power
- Hidden Power (Ice)
- Leaf Storm
- Synthesis

Pokémon #2 : Jumpluff
Nature: Adamant Item: N/A
EV: 252 Atk 252 Spe 4 Def IVs: All IVs
Ability: Chlorophyll
- Sunny Day
- U-turn
-Aerobatics
- Sleep Powder

Trainer #4
Spoiler:
Pokémon #1: Leafeon
Nature: Jolly Item: Occa Berry
EV: 252 Atk 252 Spe 4 Def IVs: All Ivs
Ability: Chlorophyll
-Swords Dance
- Baton Pass
- Leaf blade
- Knock off

Pokémon #2 : Breloom
Nature: Adamant Item: Life Orb
EV: 252 Atk 252 Spe 4 Def IV: All IVs
Ability: Technician
- Bullet seed
- Focus Punch
- Mach punch
- Spore

GYM LEADER FLORA!
Spoiler:
Pokemon #1: Sunflora
Nature: Modest Item: Focus Sash
EV: 252 SpA 252 Spe 4 HP IV: HP Ice
Ability: Solar Power
-Sunny Day
-Giga Drain
-Earth Power
-Hidden Power Ice

Pokemon #2 :Venusaur
Nature:Timid Item: Leftovers
EV: 72HP 4Def 252SpA 180Spe IV: All
Ability: Chlorophyll
-Sludge Bomb
-Giga Drain
-Toxic
-Synthesis

Pokemon #3: Sceptile
Nature: Adamant Item: Grass Gem
EV: 252 Atk 252 Spe 4 Spd IVs: All
Ability: Unburden
-Drain Punch
-Leaf Blade
-Acrobatics
-Swords Dance

Pokemon #4: Serperior
Nature:Timid Item: Leftovers
EV: 252 SpA 252 Spe 4SpD IV: HP Fire
Ability: Contrary
-Leaf Storm
-Dragon Pulse
-Giga Drain
-Hidden Power

Pokemon #5: Breloom
Nature: Adamant Item: Life Orb
EV: 252 Atk 252 Spe 4 Def
Ability: Technician
-Bullet Seed
-Swords Dance
-Mach Punch
-Spore

Pokemon #6: Shiftry
Nature: Adamant Item: King's Rock
EV: 252 Atk 252 Spe 4 SpD
Ability: Chlorophyll
-Bullet Seed
-Rock Slide
-Fake out
-Foul Play

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By Some Body
#169798 About the Gym Trainers:
  • Several Pokémon are clearly sun-based. However, several of these Pokémon either are on teams with no sun setter (Bulbasaur, Leafeon) or are sent out before the team's sun setter is (Oddish, Sunflora), both preventing these Pokémon from taking advantage of sun. Either convert the Pokémon into non-sun variants (e.g., by replacing Chlorophyll with the Pokémon's other Ability), give these Pokémon Sunny Day themselves, or lead with a Pokémon who can set up sun.
  • Also related to Pokémon order, Jumpluff has little use for U-turn if it comes out last.
  • There may be too many Life Orbs among these Pokémon. While Life Orb is the de facto power-boosting item, players who challenge this Gym will quickly see the lack of variety as Life Orb makes its presence very obvious. Consider varying held items more; some of your other options for offensive items include Heat Rocks, Focus Sashes, Gems, and (with some moveset changes) choice items.
  • All of your NFE Pokémon are clearly using copy/pasted EV spreads from Little Cup, which does not require maximum EVs due to all Pokémon being at level 5 (excess EVs wouldn't make a difference). As all Pokémon are not at level 5 here, use all of the 510 (508) EVs that you are allotted.
  • Knock Off has 20 base power with Gen 5 mechanics and is not very useful for Leafeon.
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By Morgebby00
#169814 Thank you for all the feedback! They are all very good points !
Here are the fixes:
- Changed order of the pokemon:
Trainer #1: 1. Bulbasaur --> 2. Snivy ---> Tangela
Trainer #2: 1.Exxeggutor ---> 2. Oddish
Trainer #3: 1. Jumpluff ---> Sunflora
Trainer #4: 1. Leafeon ---> Breloom

Pokémon moveset changes:
Spoiler:
Bulbasaur's growth now replaced with Sunny Day
Leafeon's Knock off now replaced with Sunny Day


- Life orb changes
When I was thinking this all up I kept telling myself there were too many of these .
Spoiler:
Exeggutor:
-Replaced Exeggutor's Life Orb with Sitrus Berry
-Exeggutor's new EVs 248 HP 176 Def 84Spe IVs: All
-Nature: Bold Ability: Harvest
- Substitute
-Leech Seed
-Sunny Day
-Protect

Sunflora:
Sunflora's Life Orb replaced with Grass Gem

Other Pokémon changes
Spoiler:
Jumpluff:
Jumpluff given Focus Sash

Oddish:
New EVs: 252 SpA 252 Spe 4Hp

Bulbasaur:
New EVs: 252 Spa 252 Spe 4Hp

Snivy:
New EVs: 252 Spa 252Spe 4Hp


Once again thank you for all the feedback! :)
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By Pokenerd8
#169847 personally just me, but i would have loved if you put different variation of blocks for the roof and wall design, using greens and yellows etc, not required but i think it will make the gym look alot better than only having wood and logs for the entire outside of the building :)
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By Morgebby00
#169880 I agree its pretty bland in some areas, and I think stained glass would really help with the roof design. I'll leave it as it is right now, but I am not against changing it. :)
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By MrMasochism
#169906 it's partly the abundance of one sort of wood I think. If you mixed up your usage with a variety of different woods it would feel much less bland
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By Robotbo23
#170005 I like this design! My only suggestion is small and would be to perhaps add glass to the sides that are currently solid wood, simply because this design seems to be inspired by a greenhouse :)
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By Morgebby00
#170031 Thanks for the feedback! I experimented with that a little and I couldn't find a good way to do it ;-; I might look into it more later :)
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By CrazyQuilman157
#170034 I'm not 100% sure if the purpose is to be a maze, and redstone seems to break in spawning any large object, in the mod. But, adding in the invisible blocks or something of that nature might help you in case people try and break the challenge by, say flying over everything they can.
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