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Pokecenter

PostPosted: 07 Jan 2013 01:07
by Tom_X
So, I wanted to try my ability to build and did my best on building this Pokecenter, inspired in the games. Tell me what it looks like and what it needs. I also tried to make it for both SSP and SMP, so there's a Pokecenter and also A Trading Station. Screenshots:
Front:
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Inside:
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Trading Station (upstairs):
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Upper view:
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Hope you like it!

Re: Pokecenter

PostPosted: 07 Jan 2013 01:10
by SPG
looks way too boxy

Re: Pokecenter

PostPosted: 07 Jan 2013 05:17
by Skylord_Nanbug
Personly love the inside but the outside could use some moer work, like maybe less boxy as SPG said and I would probly add a few windows.

Re: Pokecenter

PostPosted: 07 Jan 2013 09:39
by Skibb
It looks way too simple , at least the outside .

Re: Pokecenter

PostPosted: 07 Jan 2013 09:45
by Rados
I don't like buildings made out of wool entirely but yea, its just a cube in the outside

Re: Pokecenter

PostPosted: 07 Jan 2013 11:09
by Tom_X
Alright, working on getting it some windows and a less boxy appearance in the outside...
EDIT:

Done. For a less "boxy" appearence, I combined many aspects of different gen. Pokecenters into my own, and re-did the entrance. although not the inside as it's fine.
Screenshots:
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What do you think of it?

Re: Pokecenter

PostPosted: 07 Jan 2013 12:01
by Cgags1789
Well..... I'll try not to make this sound rude since I'm trying not to but..... It doesn't look to great to me. I've never seen orange on a Pokemon Center.... The only colors I've ever seen are white, red, brown, black and sometimes blue depending on if a Pokemart is tied in with it. You did make it seem less like a block but the roof seems to stop at the sign. If you continue that back it would make it look better or you could just flatten the whole roof itself. Also if you don't want to make it completely out of wool for those who don't like all wool buildings you could make the white wool walls out of iron blocks.

Re: Pokecenter

PostPosted: 07 Jan 2013 12:08
by Tom_X
Cgags1789 wrote:Well..... I'll try not to make this sound rude since I'm trying not to but..... It doesn't look to great to me. I've never seen orange on a Pokemon Center.... The only colors I've ever seen are white, red, brown, black and sometimes blue depending on if a Pokemart is tied in with it. You did make it seem less like a block but the roof seems to stop at the sign. If you continue that back it would make it look better or you could just flatten the whole roof itself. Also if you don't want to make it completely out of wool for those who don't like all wool buildings you could make the white wool walls out of iron blocks.

First thing, orange things:
Spoiler:
http://www.google.com.ar/imgres?q=pokecenter&hl=en&safe=off&sa=X&tbo=d&biw=1024&bih=665&tbm=isch&tbnid=dSPuqwk1j7UcCM:&imgrefurl=http://alucus.deviantart.com/art/Hoenn-pokecenter-revamp-2-143041070&docid=MP6nOv0zhvDtBM&imgurl=http://www.deviantart.com/download/143041070/Hoenn_pokecenter_revamp_2_by_Alucus.png&w=304&h=128&ei=yvXqUJTDENTD0AHLqoGQDQ&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=587&vpy=95&dur=1226&hovh=102&hovw=243&tx=90&ty=81&sig=107973236250865482082&page=1&tbnh=102&tbnw=220&start=0&ndsp=21&ved=1t:429,r:8,s:0,i:109

Second, thanks for your opinion. I will consider flattening the roof (which will mean making the white wool of the walls 1 block higher because otherwise the Trading Machines look weird) and will take into account the iron block walls

Re: Pokecenter

PostPosted: 07 Jan 2013 12:53
by Skibb
To be honest , i dont really like it like it is now . It looks just too boring :/ You should try to make it bigger and use a bigger variety of blocks .

Re: Pokecenter

PostPosted: 07 Jan 2013 13:16
by Tom_X
Skibb wrote:To be honest , i dont really like it like it is now . It looks just too boring :/ You should try to make it bigger and use a bigger variety of blocks .

Bigger, you say? that would need a total re-doing. Besides, I actually thought the spawning thingy had a block limit, so I tried to save space...