[Rzxa]

- 09 Oct 2013 07:45 #80545 (This is my first story in this forums I got this idea from burgy I think any feedback is good)
Bored! SPG voice was very loud
I need to do something SPG thought in his mind
I got it SPG said
I'm gonna go outside my house and punch trees on the forest SPG planned
SPG then goes outside and punch trees
Suddenly SPG saw something
whats that SPG wondered
SPG went near to the creature
The creature appearance was green and hairy and it looks like a Creeper
The creeper then said Bye Bye SPG this is your end
The creeper then explodes
SPG wakes up and scream BANANA!
Uhh it's just a dream
There was another Creeper near him again
Then the creeper explodes
(No harm was made to SPG while making this story and this was just me trying the suggestion of burgy )

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[Animalol]

- 10 Oct 2013 22:49 #80865 ...I don't even...
No comment.

[5:47:48 PM] AnDwHaT5[Pixelmon Staff]: RADOS
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[Nova Spartan]

- 10 Oct 2013 23:15 #80871 wat

[Burgy]

- 10 Oct 2013 23:34 #80875 I inspired something, doe.

[Waterboyr]

- 12 Oct 2013 11:35 #81189 ...

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[KuryoZT]

- 17 Oct 2013 15:24 #82123 WARNING!!: It sucks, so read it when you got time to kill, and boredom to get.

Lighting was lightning up the sky, thunder roaring through the city.
One boy is running under the deluge, defenseless against the might of the elements, he's barely able to make it back to his home, only to find himself
exhausted, and his cold home giving him no reward for his courage.
He falls on his bed, his energy depleted.
If only I accepted, he thinks to himself, before sleep gets to him.

A ray of sunshine is slowly gaining terrain in the room. it plays with small particules in the air, before finding its target. shining more than ever,
the light is waking the boy up.
He sits up in the still moist green grass. Yawns so gracefully small animals, that got curious and approched him during his sleep, runs or flies away.
Still too asleep to realize the sublte difference in his environnement, the boy stands up, decides it would be cereals this morning, and walks toward
what he thinks will be the closet where his food is, a small mouse hits him and make him fall to the ground.
Only after such a shock does he finally realizes.
"That's not my room!! Where.... Where the heck am I?"



Good enough? Ya wants a story? I can write bull-like one, such as the one above.
Taking any criticism though. But yeah, it does suck, doesn't it?

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I did my job, now do yours, a choice.
I'm weird, so don't take me too seriously, I'd feel bad for you.
Unless I say it, I never mean harm, it'd make me look bad if you think so.

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- 18 Oct 2013 17:27 #82301 Uh.... I'm not even sure what this is, but I liked the part when SPG asplodes!
Nah, apart from that, it's kind of a good story that rhymes, if only most of them weren't with "said" it would be cooler but it's fine like this. Good job!

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[Rzxa]

- 19 Oct 2013 03:24 #82403 Thank you people it's a little confusing but it's my first anyway

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- 20 Oct 2013 01:42 #82673 Its funny but ... no comment only funny but not that funny

[Kmerr]

- 20 Oct 2013 18:50 #82882 Best story ever