Re: Into The World
Posted:
07 Apr 2014 14:33
by IdeasMen123
Would it help if I changed the color to something else?
1Charak2 wrote:its getting good just the purple mess's with my vision
Re: Into The World
Posted:
22 Apr 2014 23:48
by IdeasMen123
I finally took the time to clean out Chapter 1 and 2, making more sense and removing traces of "awkward" parts and oddly written sentences. Tomorrow I'll do the same with the rest of the chapters, then fulfill my promise and change the talking parts with a different color. Then finally with a new chapter! We're going to get into "The Dream World" where the plot will take more place.
Re: Into The World
Posted:
23 Apr 2014 21:45
by IdeasMen123
Phew, Finally cleaned up the whole story and made the story way straighter then before. Patched up confusing parts and removed misused adjectives and replacing them with more proper ones. Will start the next chapter tomorrow and then will change the talking color.
Re: Into The World
Posted:
06 Aug 2014 22:17
by IdeasMen123
I sincerely apologize for leaving this story un-finished, it's been months since I've checked back, and it's unbelievable that this thread has over 1400 views, the highest view count in the story section! It means a lot that people actually like this (or view it) So I'm coming back and finishing this story, book, whatever you wanna call it, and update it as much as possible, be sure to give me feedback as it always helps and helps me to know that people are still eagered for the rest of the story to unfold! Cya tomorrow with a bunch of new chapters!
~IdeasMen