- 08 Dec 2014 16:54
Very nice. But it would be amazing if a modeler of your caliber were to help finish the gens in order. Because, ya know, everyone's trying to get gen 2 done so they can move on to gen three. But really it doesn't matter, because that's one less Pokemon to do in gen 5. BUT STILL, I'm just saying because, to be honest, the best gens for me were the first four. :D
Now about the models...
My complaints for Foongus are the arms and head. The arms are too sharp/pointy, and are a bit too long. It would be better if it were rounded out.
The head is too flattened out, like Amoongus. Make it thicker, and not expand outward as much.
Foongus Model rating: 8/10 "Great!"
The "hands" should be a little thicker. To help make sense of why, just imagine squeezing veins into that thin "hand."
Again, the head is waaaay to spread out. Try making it smaller inward and then raising the top(if you are confused, check Xaumbas model at the very end of this post and look at the head).
The body is a little too... I wanna say thick and stretched out? Try reducing the height a little and taking some of the fat off. :D
Overrall, the work is good for a first model of it (trust me. Ive seen waaay worst). But just rule out those kinks and I think it should be good! :D
Amoongus model rating: 6/10 "Could use improvement."
P.S: Here is another model done by Xuamba;https://sketchfab.com/models/0f5fc16b4f ... ce17133db3
I try to help modelers in their modeling. I provide pictures, ratings, suggestions/pointers... anything to help!