Let's start this Journey!
Right now the snout seems too pointed and it tapers too much.
It's kind of hard to describe, but you can see how in the official picture the top of the snout doesn't taper down as much. It's kind of like... boat shaped? Does that make sense?
I also have to admit that the neck leaves bother me. They don't really follow the shape of the official design. They should look more like... y'know, curved down leaves.