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Shieldon + Bastiodon

PostPosted: 16 May 2017 01:00
by skywardstrike28
Bastiodon's mouth is a little weird but I'm not sure how to fix it, other than that I think this is ready for feedback.
Shieldon:

Shieldon by Skywardstrike on Sketchfab



Bastiodon:

Bastiodon by Skywardstrike on Sketchfab

EDIT 1: Fixed Shieldon's nose and Bastiodon's back legs.

Shieldon + Bastiodon

PostPosted: 16 May 2017 03:25
by elxanderOMG
I dont see anything wrong with bastiodon's mouth, at the moment XD, the models look fantastic, the only thing I would say is move bastiodon's backfeet a bit back so its legs are aligned, and for shieldon, his nose should be round, not pointy, thats all i see right now, good job :)

Re: Shieldon + Bastiodon

PostPosted: 18 May 2017 05:32
by skywardstrike28
Updated, also the deformations around Bastiodon's face are all sketchfab.

Shieldon + Bastiodon

PostPosted: 18 May 2017 09:43
by elxanderOMG
ok, i made a full analisis and i found some issues:

Shieldon: the snout is not that large,
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the front foot claws should be more triangular like the back one, and the shield on its head should be smoother and if you notice it has like 2 sections
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Bastiodon: i've noticed that bastiodon's face is simpler than you think, its flat and the nose is just like a large deformed cone and its horns come out from both sides(for the horns there's no need to make them with the same mesh, they'll look better as separated meshes), and for last give more detail on the horns on the top of its head
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Shieldon + Bastiodon

PostPosted: 21 Jun 2017 13:27
by elxanderOMG
are you gonna fix them? still active? XD