[StopherSylvia]

- 02 Aug 2013 03:28 #64812 Here is my attempt at Beldum

Regular(ignore the armature(the see through boxes on the claws))

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Shiny

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Update 8/2/2013 8:00 PM

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Fixed coloring and moved and shrunk claws

Quick fixed: Eye was askew to the left.

[MrSPARTAN23]

- 02 Aug 2013 08:14 #64880 Good . But maybe the iron things are a little bit too close on themselves. By keeping their form can't you make them more "open"?

[Silvermoon0616]

- 02 Aug 2013 13:44 #64966 It is a very nice start to the model, but a few things could be touched up a little. The body is a little too long and needs to be flared out a little more. The iron peg are too close to each other, but that is because they are a little too long. The little peg on the top of its head is also a little too short and probably should not interfere with the "head."

All around it is still a pretty good model.

[DaRealDrobot]

- 02 Aug 2013 18:59 #65032

It is a very nice start to the model, but a few things could be touched up a little. The body is a little too long and needs to be flared out a little more. The iron peg are too close to each other, but that is because they are a little too long. The little peg on the top of its head is also a little too short and probably should not interfere with the "head."

All around it is still a pretty good model.

Here is a back photo of his claws, do they still look to close together

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It's Latin if you wanna know.

[StopherSylvia]

- 02 Aug 2013 19:01 #65033

It is a very nice start to the model, but a few things could be touched up a little. The body is a little too long and needs to be flared out a little more. The iron peg are too close to each other, but that is because they are a little too long. The little peg on the top of its head is also a little too short and probably should not interfere with the "head."

All around it is still a pretty good model.

Here is a pic of behind him, still look like the claws are to close together?

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by the way I did this in a half an hour

[Silvermoon0616]

- 02 Aug 2013 23:55 #65081 It's not really that they're close together, they just angle in too much. The official artwork makes them seem more like spikes, rather than claws. They end in a point, rather than a curve.

[StopherSylvia]

- 05 Aug 2013 00:40 #65654

It's not really that they're close together, they just angle in too much. The official artwork makes them seem more like spikes, rather than claws. They end in a point, rather than a curve.

I'm confused are you suggesting I make them more like spikes or claws cause the already come to a point

[Silvermoon0616]

- 05 Aug 2013 22:53 #65930

It's not really that they're close together, they just angle in too much. The official artwork makes them seem more like spikes, rather than claws. They end in a point, rather than a curve.

I'm confused are you suggesting I make them more like spikes or claws cause the already come to a point

I meant make them more like spikes, I just couldn't word it properly.

[StopherSylvia]

- 05 Aug 2013 23:04 #65933

It's not really that they're close together, they just angle in too much. The official artwork makes them seem more like spikes, rather than claws. They end in a point, rather than a curve.

I'm confused are you suggesting I make them more like spikes or claws cause the already come to a point

I meant make them more like spikes, I just couldn't word it properly.

I made them more like spikes

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[StopherSylvia]

- 10 Aug 2013 19:35 #67289

It is a very nice start to the model, but a few things could be touched up a little. The body is a little too long and needs to be flared out a little more. The iron peg are too close to each other, but that is because they are a little too long. The little peg on the top of its head is also a little too short and probably should not interfere with the "head."

All around it is still a pretty good model.

"Flared out"? Do you mean fatter?