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My first. Model! Spoink!

PostPosted: 08 May 2013 20:36
by Pikaxchu
This is my first Pokémon model, Spoink. I hope I can get good feedback.


Spoiler:
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Re: My first. Model! Spoink!

PostPosted: 08 May 2013 20:39
by jeremy58589721
im pretty sure you cant post pics straight from your PC, you need to upload it to a host and than link it in.

Re: My first. Model! Spoink!

PostPosted: 08 May 2013 20:44
by Pikaxchu
How would I do that?

Re: My first. Model! Spoink!

PostPosted: 08 May 2013 20:46
by jeremy58589721
umm you should just be able to make a free account at imgur.com and than upload them on there and than link them on here :D


edit: i think its called imgur.com D:

Re: My first. Model! Spoink!

PostPosted: 08 May 2013 23:10
by Jumpyporcupine
I think it should be about 3 times as large and more rounded. Good work I see!

Re: My first. Model! Spoink!

PostPosted: 09 May 2013 04:34
by Boogaluke
good job! although im not a big fan of the spoink/grumpig line, you did good here. an HD texture would most def make it better!

Re: My first. Model! Spoink!

PostPosted: 09 May 2013 07:56
by Ewcongogamer
HD it uP!!! I'm afraid though you might want to re-size some parts once you play with using the HD texture since you made some parts large to make the colors look right. But defiantly a good start :)

Re: My first. Model! Spoink!

PostPosted: 10 May 2013 22:57
by Tom_X
Well, apart from making it bigger, HD-isher and rounder, I'd like to add that its tail just doesn't seem right as a mere texture. Try to make it out of blocks instead, and see what you can get. Apart from that, it's a great start!

Re: My first. Model! Spoink!

PostPosted: 11 May 2013 08:44
by Ghoschief
I think the tail should be made of blocks, so that you can animate the bounce later on.

Re: My first. Model! Spoink!

PostPosted: 12 May 2013 00:45
by Hypnose
This is looking pretty good so far. Still a bit of work to be done though. Everyone's starting to want a lot more out of models. More curves through rotated blocks. Try looking up some tutorials on how to do this, or ask an experienced modeler if they have the time to help you out.
Spoink is a bery round Pokemon, so there will people expecting its model to be rounded not square. But, like I said, it's looking good. I like where you're going with this. :)