- 25 Jan 2014 23:31
#103143
Very nice model so far! It's good to have a little modeling competition as I made the other torchic spg refers to. Here are some suggestions:
The head should be more elliptical as in flatter.
The hair should be larger, as in as tall as the head. That could be fixed by simply fixing the head shape.
The ruffles should be more bushy. Maybe have two layers of fluff instead of one and make it extend all the way around the back. The back of the ruffles should be close to the tail point.
There should be a little parting of the ruffles in the neck area.
The body should also be flatter.
It looks like your torchic is leaning forward a bit. Idk if that is how you want it but have a think about it.
Finally your torchic's feat are quite pointy and look like talons. I know you are working with vertexes here but maybe move the tips in and not arch the toes.
That is what I see when I compare it to the model from battle revolutions. Good modeling and I can't wait to see this and your future models.
-Gilbert