- 08 Aug 2013 10:47
#66473
I reserve the space of third commenter to give my feedback.
I'll just do it later, when I'm on a computer that actually can load images.
Thanks for understanding that Jose/Css/the rest of yall out there.
Edit: Ok, I promised it, here it is. My own little opinion and feedback.
First of all, here is what I based myself off, not much, but the source has always been the same, and honestly, I'm pretty content with what it gives, and I got no real complains.
So, first of all, what's been said already, your Tyrogue is a bit too thin. Heck, a bit is an understatement, sorry mate. You can make it 3*, all of it. The head is way bigger than the body, but your body is just way too thin right now, it honestly looks like a freaking pole.
Also said, by Vespirs namely, his crotch area, as you guys call this I suppose, is not the right way.
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- It looks just like what it holds. Seriously, take a good look at the artwork I gave ya a little above, and what do you see there? Two balls and a stick.
So ya see? The above need to be like the body in itself, a tube, and two balloons nder, don't worry, I think it's its pants. Short pants.
Talking about legs, they seem too long. They're a 1/3 of its body size, look like 1/1. Cut some please.
Lastly, for now, its spikes, on its head. The number is right, 3, but the sizes are wrong. They're like fingers, the middle one bigger than the two others, of which I don't know which is bigger, sorry about that.
So, yeah. Some big things, a lot of little details, but it's all good. nothing too hard to deal with I think.
Good luck.
And I don't talk about colors, when I can skip them. Choice of life.
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