[kungfumidget]

- 20 Jul 2013 10:48 #59500 Here you guys it kinda just looks like a pineapple atm but I like it so far ... tell me how I should improve this.

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Added a bit of a texture only basic though

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Update 2 guys changed the hands and raised the face

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Here is the overall model



Here is the hand

[Css1234567890123]

- 20 Jul 2013 11:22 #59513 Good, Kung is back to modeling. It looks good so far, but it would be much easier to judge with a texture.

Trigore: im not soppid

[kungfumidget]

- 20 Jul 2013 11:25 #59515 Doing that now ;D just killed my computer trying.

[Vespirs]

- 20 Jul 2013 17:11 #59648 I agree with Css, it would be easier to critique if there was a texture. From what I've heard, texturing blender models is a pain in the ass. I wish you luck, and hopefully it turns out good!

[kungfumidget]

- 20 Jul 2013 17:22 #59656 Update check the first post guys .... very basic texture done ... the egg crack is really weird and gone wavy xD .... but let me know what you think

[Josecami]

- 20 Jul 2013 17:57 #59692 Awesome kung fu, and the texture is so HD....

http://forum.pixelmonmod.com/viewtopic.php?f=125&t=16112

[Vespirs]

- 20 Jul 2013 18:53 #59704

Update check the first post guys .... very basic texture done ... the egg crack is really weird and gone wavy xD .... but let me know what you think

I actually really like it now. Like, a lot. It looks fabulous ;D. It is turning out great so far, only thing I can suggest is that you make the head and the egg shell seem different. If you look closely, it looks as though when the egg hatched, the top broke off, only revealing togepi's head,

so I suggest making the head and egg shell seem seperate, or make the egg shell points jut out?

[Css1234567890123]

- 20 Jul 2013 22:31 #59753 Looks good now with a texture, just have to finish the rest of the shapes on it.

Trigore: im not soppid

[karrybird]

- 20 Jul 2013 23:27 #59780 it looked good, until you added a texture...

first of all, black, get rid of it.

second, the face should be higher up as with the top of the shell, and look more like the person above had mentioned. the outline for the crack should not be so thick either

the hands also look too pointy and the face is asymmetrical.

the body also should be fatter towards the bottom and pointier towards the top (think of a real egg broken in half. look at the picture above of it's body to see what i mean.

~stop this train, i wanna get off and go home again. i can't take the speed it's moving in, i know i can't, but honestly, won't someone stop this train.~

[Vespirs]

- 21 Jul 2013 00:17 #59806

it looked good, until you added a texture...

first of all, black, get rid of it.

second, the face should be higher up as with the top of the shell, and look more like the person above had mentioned. the outline for the crack should not be so thick either

the hands also look too pointy and the face is asymmetrical.

the body also should be fatter towards the bottom and pointier towards the top (think of a real egg broken in half. look at the picture above of it's body to see what i mean.

I completely forgot about black xD Yes, never use black, the contrast is horrible. Use a dark shade of a color that would go well with the texture. Karry is like the god of all modelers and a master at critiquing things . And I agree with the hands, now that I look at it. Good points karry