Pixelmon Mod

Im sure spg is gonna have a fit :U but i took a break to work on totodile.

but as you can see it needs more work.. so i wanted to try to get everyone's feedback and ill try the best i can to get this close enough to a totodile.

im not done. i still need to work on its nose and work on texturing inside of his mouth
heres the pictures:

~~ TOTODILE ~~

Front/side View ~

Closer Front View ~

Back View ~

I think it looks awesome so far, some pictures not working for me though.
Edit: Nevermind I refreshed the page.

he is WAY too stubby (his body is small), his tail is way too fat, and his mouth needs to curve in

The red in the mouth just seems off, but I am not sure if that's from the overlaying teeth with see through texture. I would say the same with the tail and nose (face) both seem fat and need to come more to points. Any nostrils, those could be added?

if you read the 1st post. i said i wasnt done. the nose is still being worked on and the mouth is not textured yet

Looks good, but what's that green thing on the top of its mouth? is it just Techne, or an intended thing?

thats untextured nose. im still debating how to do the the upper jaw

I'd like to see some more height in his body. So I'd raise the head a few blocks.

I'll definitely agree on the height and tail problems. I'd like to see a little attention to the hands, if you can manage it. It would also be nice if you could smooth out the bottom a little somehow. Other than that, excellent work so far. I'm impressed.

Here are some visual suggestions.


Hope this helps. Also I think the texture is far too noisy.
Try using a blur effect on the texture to make the noise more bearable.