lightdasher wrote:KuryoZT wrote:So will you shorten them, at least a little?
Shorten them which way?
Vikerus wrote:Only a couple nit picks from my end. The shoulders kinda bug me cause they leave gaps where the arm meets the body. Cleaning up joins is just making the arms elbow more fluid with out the edges of the boxes showing. This is why I voted three sections the middle one would be 1x1 connecting the other upper and lower arm. Which might make the animation of the arm look nicer too. I like where you are going with the eyes but if you could work on making them even better it would help this model a ton. After all you are making a more simple design so once you have proportions right. The details are what will make this model truly " Legendary. "
Some things are kept like that on purpose, I call it "a dash of Minecraft"
Although I was thinking of removing the arms and making it one piece instead, but more "wing" like
Vikerus wrote:The only major issue is the head size and shape. I still think it's too small and not long enough. The shape just isn't graceful enough for me.
Only so much you can do with squares, but I'll see what I can do, and when you say long enough; do you mean long enough going up, or long enough going back from the face?
Sorry to be like this...But you can't brush off a ton of suggestions with "...call it 'a dash of minecraft'" These are suggestions that need to be looked at. Especially the gaps at the shoulders. I don't mind if you don't change much or do what I would do. But please don't just wipe it all off the table like that and dismiss it cause that's really the wrong way of taking feedback.
The eyes just need more done to make them pop. Might just be some recoloring. And having the gaps where the arms join just looks amateur. Not to be rude but I have been here a while ^^
The head isn't long enough going back from the face. If I were you I would see if there is a better way to express the shape instead of the way you have stacked the blocks.
Now I see why I don't like the eyes! Celebi has no pupil xD
Don't get me wrong this is a seriously nice model. But take your time and make something to be truly proud of man.