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Re: Suicune(Un-finished)Feedback please!

PostPosted: 08 Apr 2013 01:16
by Jumpyporcupine
Suicine could really use a snout. Try fixing up the head a little. Good start!

Re: Suicune(Un-finished)Feedback please!

PostPosted: 08 Apr 2013 02:21
by kungfumidget
PressXForPie wrote:Ok so Does It look Better Or worse?


That looks better than before well done, we can see you are taking in the advise, which is good.

Re: Suicune(Un-finished)Feedback please!

PostPosted: 08 Apr 2013 10:56
by PressXForPie
Ok Thanks Guys Its Getting there with your help and advice. Im Gonna Fix up the head when im done with the body and tails. Plus I do need to fix the head because when i tried to make the diamond it came out crooked. But anyway guys thanks for your help and support.

Re: Suicune(Un-finished)Feedback please!

PostPosted: 08 Apr 2013 15:26
by Sundial_MC
For the sides of the body, to avoid it being too blocky, use 45 degrees rotated blocks for the sides, if you understand what I mean?

Re: Suicune(Un-finished)Feedback please!

PostPosted: 08 Apr 2013 20:00
by PressXForPie
kk ty again guys. Im done for the day. got friends sleeping over.

Re: Suicune(Un-finished)Feedback please!

PostPosted: 28 Apr 2013 17:09
by PressXForPie
Sorry I have not uploaded in a while. I was on spring break and some family things happedned. Back to work.

Re: Suicune(Un-finished)Feedback please!

PostPosted: 29 Apr 2013 08:01
by Ewcongogamer
List of suggestions:
1. I think the neck needs to be angled farther up
2. The ribbons coming out of the same place.
3. Feet flatten, why were they at an angle?
4. Move the body down to have the feet meet the model block
5. The nob on the bottom of his head feels weird as a block, could be better done later if you use a cross of two flat textures of 1x1 blocks.
6. Break the head apart to add more character to the head.

Re: Suicune(Un-finished)Feedback please!

PostPosted: 29 Apr 2013 14:35
by lugiaisbeast101
Sorry to bother, but please add a little more thickness to the neck, and lift it, the back of the neck goes right together with its back and his neck is thicker, even if you can't see it clearly in the picture, at the moment, its head and neck doesn't match its body length. Then you can incorporate everyone else's ideas and your own. Oh, and try to add more of a thigh to its back leg. Keep at it and it could possibly be added in to the mod in the near future.

Re: Suicune(Un-finished)Feedback please!

PostPosted: 01 May 2013 17:16
by PressXForPie
Thanks guys getting right to work

Re: Suicune(Un-finished)Feedback please!

PostPosted: 01 May 2013 21:38
by lugiaisbeast101
PressXForPie wrote:Thanks guys getting right to work

If you wouldn't mind, post your current progress in the begging page by editing the post with the old 3 versions, and it would be good to put them in spoilers
Spoiler:
like this
. In doing this, you can organize things easier and it won't clutter up space. It will also help people see that you updated and just didn't quit from modeling.