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Re: My first model, not textured, ariados

PostPosted: 03 Apr 2013 14:57
by kungfumidget
For simplicity sake

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Anyway here

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You can see the 'wings' or whatever are on its back are angled outwards.
Also needs fangs, and the horn needs to be longer.

Re: My first model, not textured, ariados

PostPosted: 03 Apr 2013 18:15
by zero_breaker
It's fat...
Making the model far bigger can add more details to the model, so try it!

Re: My first model, not textured, ariados

PostPosted: 04 Apr 2013 18:21
by Sundial_MC
Meh, I was going to say it's fat.
It's a pretty nice model, and yes, you should definitely make the model bigger. The front "horn" looks a bit weird, too.

Re: My first model, not textured, ariados

PostPosted: 04 Apr 2013 18:34
by zero_breaker
Mainly:
The whole body is fat and blocky
The base of the "wings" need to be thinner, and the tip is too short
The middle part of the leg needs to be larger
THE EYEZ
use texture to do that
The shape of the head is not correct

Though, I can see you really tried. Try looking at others' models and improve your Ariados. Good luck!

Mind if I steal this from you? (gets punched)

Re: My first model, not textured, ariados

PostPosted: 06 Apr 2013 04:18
by Sundial_MC
zero_breaker wrote:Mainly:
The whole body is fat and blocky
The base of the "wings" need to be thinner, and the tip is too short
The middle part of the leg needs to be larger
THE EYEZ
use texture to do that
The shape of the head is not correct

Though, I can see you really tried. Try looking at others' models and improve your Ariados. Good luck!

Mind if I steal this from you? (gets punched)

Re: My first model, not textured, ariados

PostPosted: 06 Apr 2013 08:54
by KuryoZT
I've really done this just to try out, if anybody want to work on it on their own, there is absolutly nothing that should stop you, after all as long as it's to make the game better, I can, and want only to help you in any way I can. Of coursse I'll try to make it better on my own as well, but I'm just slow and bad, so my model might ( and surely will, especially if you guys work on it too) not make it to the game, but I'm not worried about that, I'm more worried about how to help make the game better, and make myself better at techne ( cos that thing is really hard to get used to).
And so, my point is, don't even ask, do it, but do it better

Re: My first model, not textured, ariados

PostPosted: 06 Apr 2013 13:52
by Jumpyporcupine
This could really use a texture.