By MAVRIKO
#132903 First model for Smoochum. Please give DESCRIPTIVE feedback so I can fix it to the best of my abilities. Also leave tips on how to texture things like eyes on blender.
https://sketchfab.com/models/acf8ab49fb ... 668c34c9ff

the hair has been redone but some wierd clipping/connecting has occured plus lips and head size fixed

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By benNmacie
#132904
MAVRIKO » 25 Jul 2014 23:02 wrote:First model for Smoochum. Please give feedback and tips on how to texture things like eyes on blender.
https://sketchfab.com/models/acf8ab49fb ... 668c34c9ff

the heads a little to big well the whole body is a little to big the hair is too short make the lips more distinguished i believe
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By MAVRIKO
#132908
benNmacie » 25 Jul 2014 23:19 wrote:
MAVRIKO » 25 Jul 2014 23:02 wrote:First model for Smoochum. Please give feedback and tips on how to texture things like eyes on blender.
https://sketchfab.com/models/acf8ab49fb ... 668c34c9ff

the heads a little to big well the whole body is a little to big the hair is too short make the lips more distinguished i believe
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in what way is the body too big? is it to fat or tall?
By Lizzy39632
#132947 This is in the wrong Gen -_-

Ceejayvee, he has to texture the eyes, not model them on...

And Benmacie, please use a better reference like the official art.

MAVIKO, the body needs to be more round and stubby, the lips would need to be textured, the hair needs to widen around the sides of the face.

cdn.bulbagarden.net/upload/0/0e/238Smoochum.png
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